Thread:ShinyLugia99/@comment-26183363-20150427233950/@comment-26130843-20150428052321

I don't have particular methods to teach you but I do have advice. For starters, stop your obsession over these fake characters you created (Sophia etc). That is severly disturbing and it makes me question your sanity. Lastly, reduce the amount of blood and gore in your stories. For a kid of 12 or 11, you have an extremely wild and perverted imagination. I believe you should seek a fresh start in writing- try to get ideas by looking at critically acclaimed pastas (Ben Drowned, MARIO, 1999) and avoid any grammar and punctuation errors. I see some potential in you but your stories are the reason why you're one of the most feared and hated users on our wiki.